The first time I...
The first time I...
pulled a guy
he left me for five years
The second time
I pulled a guy
he asked me five more times
that second time
he was never mine
his heart belonged
to
another
man
oh my,
the second time I pulled a guy
he was out and out
a gay man
ha, ha ha.
well, that was my attempt at writing poetry in creative writing..
hands up who thinks I should hand it in??
creative criticisms folks...
2 comments:
I *particularly* like the little rhyme
"oh my,
the second time i pulled a guy"
!
My hand is totally up.
That was Emily.
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